smilie poem

This week we had to do a simlie poem and it was very interesting. Every line had to have a simlie in it. It was very difficult to thnk about a poem. I had to dicide very carefully about what poem to do. It was fun thinking about a poem. When we worked we had to stay focused other wise we don't get our work done. I really had to go threw a lot of poems to get to the one I really wanted. Righ at th end I found the one I really liked. It made sence to me and hopefully other poeple will also understand it. I didn't like working on the other poems I did but I had fun when I did this one...........

   

                                                                                         

Poems, Fire Fly

         

                                                                                                    

 

                                                                                 

                                                                                                                                                  

 

 

Science Expo

I chose Static Electricity because it was easy and it was much more fun than the other experiments that we had to do. I worked with Luke Sucking and it went quite well. When we did the five second version it was much more easier than saying the whole thing out again and again. I think when we did the experiment wat difficult because he did not pay attention with me. When we did our poster our lines were very skew. Except for that I think our poster went quite well. I was very nervous for the day but when we were busy with the expo I was not scared any more. It went quite well during the expo. It was fun and hard to work with my partner at the same time.

My naam is Francois Retief en ek is 10 yaar oud. Ek wil jou oor myself graag vertel. My gunsteling kleur is blou en rooi. (Dit is baie mooi klere) My gunsteling musiek is 7 yaar oud. (Dit is ń baie mooi liedjie) My gunsteling kos is ń hoenderburger. (Dit is baie lekker) My beste maat se naam is Daniel P. Mu stokperdjie is om YouTube videos te kyk. Die sport wat ek speel is rugby. My gunsteling TV-program is kickin it. Die boek wat ek lees is Middle School. My vrinde is Daniel P Daniel L Jayden en Christian. Ek wil met trokke werk. 

My vier doelwitte is om better rugby te speel. My frinde te help. My vriende te aanmoedig en om better motorvites te ry. Een dag ek wil spaans praat. Ek speel dromme. Ek wil better raak want ek ken so min dinge van dromme. Ek wil al die pleke besoek. Ek sal graag ń Ipad A 2 hê. Ek wil ń Ipad A 2 hê want ek kan baie dinge op dit doen. Ek wil beoefen om meer motorvites te ry. Ek wil meer motorvites om te ry want ek wil better raak. Ek wil meer leer om te lees.

 

 

 

I enjoyed this powerful verb poem because I could learn new powerful verb's and I love motorbike riding. I didn't like the the powerful verb poem because you have to check if the verbs make sense. 

 

Benny's Dairy Visit of the singing Inspector

Hello My name is Benny.Today at school an Inspector walked in my class.He wore blue jeans,gray moustache,gray hair and he had gray clothes on.The Inspector first chose me and Charles I was scared and I was shivering when I got to the front of the class.He said we have to sing.The Inspector was very angry.The singing inspector's name is Raymond.

The Inspector kept on shouting at the kids and me.Jesse tried to hide but the Inspector still sore her. She was so scared she didn't say one word. Mr R was bitting his head. It was weird. I had to do exams with Charles. I hope that Mr R will go and be punished for all he does to little girls and boys.

My ILT Experience

The first thing that we did in the ILT was to do a poster. Our poster was about Tarantulas and my partner was Luke. It was a new experience for me working with a new friend. It was quite a challenge because I basically did everything. He was always inside the classroom. We made our oral very interesting and I can't believe that Lauren didn't know that I was the Tarantula. It was quite nerve-wracking when I did my oral. I liked the oral very much. It was fun when I researched the facts. Our oral was quite long.My favorite part was everything.

About me in a shack

I am so underprivileged because I didn't have such a brilliant school. My mom and dad doesn't take care of me anymore. I am 10 years old. I am in such a bad situation because I didn't have a house, I've got a shack. My shack is made out of metal,cardboard and wood. When I get up in the morning I am so tired because I didn't have a great night rest. I forgot to say what my name is, my name is Buddy. My school is not so good because we have to share 10 test books with 55 kids. On the way to school I sow one of my friend named Luke. My favourite sport is soccer.

 If I need the bathroom I have to go far down the road to get to the bathroom.If it is cold my shack is freezing but when it is hot my shack is boiling. I have to share a room with other people. We are very poor because we really struggle to get our food. When we get our food we gobble it up. To make my life better I must try to see everybody working to get money. The kids and I must try and go get some food and water for our family. We saw a fire proof house.